Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
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contemporary epoch, experts are debating whether the extinction of some
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is the main concern of our climate change
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, or there are more things
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need our attention. Personally, I am of the belief that there are indeed
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concerning issues.
Hence
,
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essay will be demonstrating both views as well as my contention. On the one hand, pollutants have caused the death of many marine animals because they end up being part of the food composition. To illustrate, when a fish eats up a plastic bottle in the ocean because it has mistaken it for a
sea
plant, it ends up being suffocated and may die.
This
can be exemplified by a recent report by the National Geographic magazine which has shown that
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percentage
of marine mammals
such
as whales have currently some artificial materials in their stomach.
Thus
, it can be said that waste products and rubbish, that are being thrown in the oceans, do not only have some malignant effects on
sea
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but
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threaten to negatively impact our food chain.
On the other hand
, climate change and
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sea
levels are much more concerning phenomena than consumed merchandise.
In other words
, if exhaust fumes and emissions continue to be emitted into the atmosphere, it will eventually lead to increasing temperatures which in turn will melt the icebergs of the poles. As a matter of fact, according to an article that has been published recently
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a scientific website, it is expected that some of the
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major metropolises,
such
as
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Alexandria
, New York, and even
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Amsterdam
, are threatened to be fully submerged in water before the end of
this
century.
Therefore
, it can be observed that
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sea
levels are one the most dangerous consequences of
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atmospheric damage
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humans than any other
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. In conclusion, after
this
essay has manifested the abovementioned points it can be reiterated that despite the fact that the extinction of natural beings is a tragic phenomenon, other predicaments
such
as increasing water levels
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worrying happenings for us as
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individuals
and families. In fact, it may lead to the death of many and the suffering of others, and I am a staunch
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believer
of that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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