Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, whiles others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

For years

sports

have been viewed as means of

the

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entertainment for regular people, but recently many

companies

are considering them as a remunerative business. A great number of sportsmen have been playing in these

companies

'

advertisements

and enticing people to buy their

products

. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

this

phenomenon has its own

both

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sides;

however

, I believe that the positive consequences of it overweight the negative ones.

This

essay will overlook both advantages and disadvantages of it which is proceeding with my idea. On the one hand, mankind can be manipulated easily to buy

products

that they do not need, which can bring them some disadvantages.

For example

, many of those

products

are expensive and a player's fan by spending

money

on them can put themselves in financial difficulties that they can not afford.

Moreover

, some of those

products

have not been used even by the players who are advertising them, so they might not have the

desirable

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effects being shown

on

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advertisements

and might result in fans' disappointment.

Consequently

, suffering from financial problems and the loss of trust in those athletes might desist them to support

sports

anymore.

On the other hand

, maintaining the quality of games and improving players require a great deal of

money

. Providing

this

money

was feasible for the government in the past, but due to

the

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inflation

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it is not plausible unless

by

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the investment of private

companies

.

For instance

, facilities, nutrients, and medical

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attention

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attentions

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attention

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that an athlete needs to keep his position as the best player are getting more expensive

day-by-day

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.

In addition

,

sport

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companies

are competing with

eachother

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each other

to provide better facilities for their audiences to respond

their

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enoremuous

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enormous

expectations for watching their games. Since human is a clever creature and is expected to use their brains before buying things and the

money

companies

earn from

this

way is playing an increasingly important role in maintaining

sports

, I believe that continuity of these

advertisements

is necessary for the

sports

industry. To sum up, the involvement of athletes in

advertisements

for

companies

earning

necessary

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budget has brought benefits and drawbacks. Advocaters' financial issues and disappointment are located against

gathering

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of

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enough budget for improving both sportsmen and audiences' facilities. I believe the negative consequences can not negate its benefits.