Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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For years the

media

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had been viewed as a means of informing people about

world

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news

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, but recently it has become a powerful and

indefeatable

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undefeatable

measure

that is

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guiding humans' beliefs and notions. I am completely in agreement with the above-said idea and the following essay will overlook two rationales that support my view.

Firstly

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world

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news

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is playing an increasingly important role in modifying humans' attitudes. The inclination of social

media

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toward a party, which is more beneficial for them, has made remaining impartial after being aware of the events happening around the

world

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implausible.

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, the great

media

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coverage of a vaccination's side effects decreased the prevalence of its acceptance over the

world

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for a while.

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, the following vast coverage of statistics

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the morbidity of the disease increased the rate of injections

subsequently

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Therefore

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, by providing guided

news

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which is the

indetachable

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detachable

undetachable

in detachable

part of our lives, the

media

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has been successfully guiding us

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the way it wants.

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, the

media

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can affect mankind's life by enticing them

buying

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products being advertised more.

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, watching advertisements during a

footbal

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football

game

subconsiousely

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subconsciously

changes our attitude about those products.

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, it can influence our shopping behaviours which can bring a lot of benefits for special companies. To sum up, the role that the

media

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is playing in humans' lives is irrefutable. I believe that both

news

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and advertisements are two areas that

media

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has been using over recent years to control our beliefs and outlook which has been completely successful.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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