Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Justine Zanini. I usually frequent the mall at Metz Centre because of the abundance of wonderful restaurants and the large variety of shops. There are,
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, a number of deficiencies which I think ought to be improved.
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, I have recently noticed that the parking bays around the shopping have been replaced by new restaurants. Considering that the majority of people drive to
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mall as well as myself,
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causes me stress as I have to waste a great deal of time just parking!
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, the food court area is really compact and cannot serve many customers because of the restaurants that had been added in the past few weeks. I suggest adding an underground carpark would be a great idea. It would increase the food court space and would attract plenty of customers during lunchtime. I understand that these problems will not be fixed overnight, but if our local newspaper allocates some extra budget, I think most of the issues I mentioned would be resolved. Thank you in advance for giving attention to my ideas. Yours faithfully, Justine Zanini
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