In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In today’s world where we live, directing young people to the right passage and achieving their goals are essential duties of parents. The message that everything is possible after hard work, is absorbed by

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in some nations.

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belief has both benefits and drawbacks for the young

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essay. On the one hand, nobody can deny that motivation is one of the advantages of delivering the aforementioned expression to

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. To be more precise,

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might be more motivated if they achieve desired results as a consequence of excessive work which in turn, pushes them to seek new targets and to make more efforts for

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successes. Excellent reading skills of school pupils,

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, could be achieved due to the daily reading for a longer time and analysis of the book content every single day.

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make the younger

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be resilient to real-life challenges and develop new skills to overcome them wisely which is another positivity of

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statement.

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, the above-mentioned saying is quite beneficial for adolescents.

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via a message that states that they can be successful if they work hard, has its own downsides.

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might affect detrimentally to the psychology of

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.

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is because there are certain realities that are unimaginable to attain even though by doing a great many efforts. Take travel to the Sun as an example, it is ridiculous to happen in reality but

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are quite simple and consider that

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can be happened by working hard.

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,

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would become more susceptible to mental issues

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as depression, the sense of loss and frustration resulting even in their suicide if they fail to achieve their desires.

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, the detrimental impact of

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proverb should not be ignored. In conclusion, in some parts of the world, the young

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is convinced that they can be more successful if they do more efforts which

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certain positive results in terms of motivation and excellent preparation of the younger

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for the struggles in the real life, while it has negative psychological effects on their development.

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, having considered all aspects, I believe that it yields more positive results in their

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prosperity.