The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about that place what suggestions you would like to make Why are you offering these suggestions?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to share my advice for your new TV show. In my opinion, your program should report Docklands, which is a modern and unique area in Melbourne. Since I came to Melbourne, I have been living in an apartment which is located along the
docklands’
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Docklands’
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coastline. I always go for a walk in the public parks and appreciate different cuisines when I have some leisure time. These contribute to my familiarity with
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suburb. First of all, I think you should report a significant proportion of iconic architecture which cannot be seen in other areas.
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, making a series to present the various types of dishes in
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suburb,
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as Asian and European cuisines, is an attractive feature of your program. Narrating buildings and food would be suitable for your new TV show. The first reason is that individuals are extremely interested in trying a wide variety of restaurants currently, and if you talk about several restaurants in Docklands, the program rating will soar.
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, local residents and holiday-makers are more likely to come to Docklands to enjoy their spare time, which can be beneficial to the local tourism industry. I hope my ideas are helpful to make your show successful. If you would like to discuss my ideas
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, please contact me without hesitation. Yours faithfully, Nina Guan

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Coherence
Put one idea in each paragraph.
Coherence
Use simple linking words like and, but, also to join ideas.
Task response
Add a short note at start to show your plan for the show.
Content
Give more detail on how the show will run, such as steps, guests, and scenes.
Tone
Keep a formal and polite tone.
Editing
Check small spelling and grammar errors.
Format
Polite tone and proper close.
Content
Clear link to Docklands and why you want to show it.
Content
Shows your own view of the place.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • place
  • city
  • town
  • coast
  • lake
  • river
  • mountain
  • old
  • new
  • people
  • local
  • visit
  • show
  • plan
  • idea
  • simple
  • easy
  • good
  • best
  • talk
  • interview
  • story
  • food
  • culture
  • life
  • work
  • time
  • day
  • night
  • view
  • sound
  • image
  • film
  • season
  • budget
  • help
  • guest
  • teacher
  • shop
  • market
  • school
  • family
  • safe
  • respect
  • local guide
  • permission
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