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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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For centuries, there are many changes in our society,more
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 are in need of help.Most
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 believe that social services
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 as working for a charity,improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children should be compulsory in the high school curriculum.In my opine,I totally agree with the notion that unpaid community service should be part of the high school program as it helps
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 in improving physical and mental health.The below essay will expound on my viewpoint.
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 with, working in NGO will help
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 to enhance their skills in the working environment,as well as they will meet a lot of new
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 which improves their communication skills and
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 help their CV.
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, reputed companies will look for good communication,social skills, and any kind of work experience.
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, young
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 will spend their leisure activities
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 as watching tv and video games due to
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 they get lazy; which will impact their mental and physical health.
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, working in public services makes them more active.
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, they will
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 learn the importance of earning money though they are not paid but, they will get to know the hard work needed to earn money.
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, recent survey results show that the
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 who are working in NGOs know the importance of money.
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 to
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,it will
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 make them responsible and stay from away getting into bad habits
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 as drugs, and crime.They should focus on their studies
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. To conclude,
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 need to involve in community services because it will help them in future and may have more benefits.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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