You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language.You have a friend who speaks this language fluently.You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Amy, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am sorry for not having been in touch recently. Life is a bit hectic. I am writing

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letter to reach out for help from you regarding learning

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. As you might remember,

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I have been working in the

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company for 4 years, I haven’t been promoted as I only know a tiny amount of knowledge of

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language.

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month, our manager told us the person who is able to speak

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fluently would get a promotion opportunity. I incredibly would love to get

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chance to go to a

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step in my career. I know your major was Professional

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when you were studying at university. I wonder if you could share with me several methods in terms of how to study

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language quickly. I would like to invite you to come to my home

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weekend to talk about your experience of learning

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language, which would be extremely beneficial to me. If you just simply don’t have time, I can completely understand. Drop me a line at your earliest convenience to let me know whether you are able to spare a moment to discuss me. Best Wishes, Nina

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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