Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV has bad influences, so this kind of infornation should be restricted on the media. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words
In
this
ever-changing world, due to the development of technology, information
can reach people worldwide much more easily, which may even include the detailed description of Add an article
the criminal
criminal
. There are some ideas that Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
those
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that information
information
should be restricted on
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in
newspaper
and television as Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
they
will cause a myriad of consequences. Correct pronoun usage
it
Thus
, I am wholeheartedly oppose
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wholeheartedly oppose
this
opinion.
To begin
with, it exists copious opinions of
restricting focused criminal description Change preposition
about
on
media due to its negative effects. Change preposition
in
This
is understandable as when posting those kinds of information
, there will be an imitation. For instance
, young people may learn the new way of cheating and frauding citizens in order to steal their money through knowledge provided by media platforms. These actions are believed to lead to more number of
crimes Correct quantifier usage
apply
such
as stealing or murdering
, for that reason, they should be restricted or even banned on news.
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murder
Nevertheless
, providing advanced knowledge about how criminals work to some extent is not utterly negative and should not be limited. When residents acknowledge of
that issue by reading the Change preposition
apply
information
about them on social
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the social
a social
platform
, individuals are more likely to avoid Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
from
being deceived or even Change preposition
apply
preventing
what will happen. Wrong verb form
prevent
For example
, there are more and more new methods of transferring drugs worldwide such
as hiding in toys or in body
by swallowing in. When Add an article
the body
citizens
aware of how criminals do that, it is easier for them to find out and report to the police. Not to mention the fact that even when those crimes are imitated, it takes less time and effort for Add a verb
arecitizens
werecitizens
government
to discover and prevent them.
All things considered, I am inclined to believe Add an article
the government
that specific descriptions
of Change the determiner
that specific description
those specific descriptions
criminal
are Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
no
need to be strictly controlled despite Correct your spelling
not
of
some Remove the preposition
apply
insubstiantial
effects it may Correct your spelling
insubstantial
substantial
brings
back. It is tough to imagine how people can deal Change the verb form
bring
with
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less
types of Change the quantifier
fewer
information
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