Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give opinion

Most of all person likes to
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.Nowadays, most
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nations
prefer to keep the
art
of their own country.It is considered that in museums every country should put
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only their own
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information
.
However
, the leading
nations
try to explore
art
and craft from all around the world.I
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agree with
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this
notion,my statement would be elaborated
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To begin
with,
this
idea will
gain
economic growth.To explain it, India is known as a
diffrent
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different
cultural country,it has various languages,
art
, tradition,different religious people.If other
nations
will put these things in their museums
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after
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some foreigners will come to watch it,after that
this
trend
gain
more and more value
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India.
For example
,France has a very famous painting of
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Monalisa
,thousands of
tourist
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tourists
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come to watch it.
Hence
it will
gain
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the nations
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nations
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nation's
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economy.
Secondly
,
also
,it is beneficial for those people who want to visit a whole world for an
art
and history,
culture
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the culture
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of them but they cannot afford it,regarding their own land's
art
galary
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gallery
they can do it.
For instance
,
mahatma
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gandhi
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museum has
a
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multiple
costoms
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customs
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and art
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art
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from all around the world.
Moreover
,
child
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the child
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is
a
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backbone of
nation
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the nation
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, they can grow up with these types of all
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information
by a small picnic
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at
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this
centre and will
gain
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of information
of
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various
nations
. To sum up, all countries should encourage
to
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their people to the knowledge of
a
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various
countries
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countries'
country's
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traditions, cultures as well as
art
.
Otherwise
, they will have limited knowledge regarding the earth.
As a
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it would be
benefical
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beneficial
for all countries.
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