Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Deforestation has now become one of the biggest factors why
earth
is experiencing global warming. Capitalize word
Earth
This
human activity happened due to
having no land to build residential or entertainment areas, which forced them to do logging. However
, this
does not mean it is a good idea to do a forest clearance.
As we can see, many countries want to achieve as high developing countries, making the government choose to build more skyscraper buildings. Deforestation happened due to
the limited resources of land, not knowing the effects it has done to the environment. Other than that, forests
in rural areas of the country may as well get logged. This
is because irresponsible parties such
as farmers need more farming grounds to plant and earn money. The result from
their selfish action may make animals lose their natural habitats.
Change preposition
of
However
, there are plenty of ways to lessen or even prevent this
activity to continue
largely. The government Change preposition
from continuing
for example
must establish clear and strict laws for those who trespass reserved forest with a larger fine and serving time in prison. Moreover
, organizations and institutions need to raise public awareness and knowledge about the importance of keeping forests
to reduce the amount of forests
destroyed by unknown individuals. Besides
, reforestation can be done by schools to teach students about the benefits and encouraging
them to reserve trees for future use.
In conclusion, to mitigate Wrong verb form
encourage
this
issue, we need to make sure all parties take part in saving the environment which can help in reducing the global heat faced by many parts of the world by restoring the lost forests
and creating a greener world.Submitted by izziannblh on
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task achievement
To improve the task response, provide more specific examples and case studies to illustrate the points made. For instance, mention specific countries or regions where deforestation due to urban development or agriculture is prominent.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence and cohesion by ensuring that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas more effectively. For example, begin the second paragraph with 'Firstly,' to indicate that it is the first main point.
task achievement
Clarify and expand on the solutions mentioned. You can elaborate on how reforestation projects can be implemented practically and the role of different stakeholders like NGOs, schools, and communities. This will add depth to the essay.
coherence cohesion
The introduction is clear and provides a good context for the discussion on deforestation.
task achievement
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the main points and presents a clear call to action for addressing deforestation.
task achievement
The essay covers several important aspects of deforestation and suggests practical solutions, which shows a good understanding of the topic.
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