Discuss your opinion on how modernism can affect our health. What can the government do to overcome such situations?

Human

health

plays a vital role to live a happy and long life. In the 21st ,century

health

is affected by modernization.So, the

government

should take precautions to overcome the effect on human

health

. I will discuss the problems and solutions, as well as, the opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, Nowadays air pollution is the biggest issue on the earth. The air pollution increased by the vehicles

likewise

, transportation system. For example, we know about, many vehicles run with the help of an internal combustion engine.

However

during the running time vehicle produce harmful gases like Carbon dioxide, Nitrogen oxide and Sulphur dioxide. So that kinds of gases

are affect

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on

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our breathing system. Apart from

this

, with modern technology everyone

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want

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eat fast

food

like pizza, burger, sandwich and so on.

Although

that types of

food

have more and more

carbohydrate

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. Which is help to

increase

the metabolism in our body. If the ratio of metabolism increases,

then

the weight of the body will

increase

so,

therefore

that kind of unhealthy

food

is harmful to our body.

On the other hand

, to

reducing

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the level of air pollution, our

government

is starting to sell

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electric vehicle in the market on the behalf of petrol and diesel vehicle.

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, these electronic cars are working on the induction motor and

this

motor does not produce any type of gases.

Hence

, electric vehicles

arebeneficial

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are beneficial

and simultaneously

increase

the economy of the country.

Furthermore

, no one can stop eating fast

food

. so, the

government

should spread Awareness of , how junk

food

is harmful to our human

health

,

otherwise

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the

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junk

food

. As a ,result only, a few people who eat fast

food

who has more money. To conclude, in the modern era people live to

hard

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and fast life. They do not care about their life. According to my opinion, If the

government

take the decision, so no one can stop him.