You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Alima, It's been so long since we met

last

time. How have you been? Anyway, I just wanted to ask you to help me

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the

emprovement

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improvement

movement

of English. As I remember, you've always been fluent and have studied at Manchester University. I'm planning to apply to Bristol University in order to be enrolled

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master's

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degree program.

However

, I realized that

although

my receptive skills are good enough, I'm not good at Writing and Speaking. I'm always in doubt when it comes to pronunciation. I can't make head or tail of stressed syllables and all those peculiarities

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pronunciation. Can you suggest any books aiming to enhance productive skills and pronouncing words correctly? Do you think watching films on streaming platforms like Netflix and Amazon Prime will be handy and practical? Are there any top-notch videos or TV series which you can recommend? I will be really glad if we can meet and hang out together. Let me know when you have free time. Hope to see you soon. Best regards, Alice

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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