Social Interaction is getting destroyed due to technology such as mobile phones. Do you agree or disagree?
All over the world
people
are using mobile phones for many hours every day. Too many choices of things
we can do from the mobile and so people
are watching mobile for three or four hours straight. Some people
think that real people
meeting like twenty years ago and spending time and enjoying is very less. I agree that using mobile phones is a habit for all and is the reason why people
do any social interaction. There is
two main reasons and will discuss in the following paragraphs.
Social media like Instagram and Facebook is very popular with all age group. The post is updated every few minutes so there are always new Change the verb form
are
things
to watch and people
refresh and they watch for many hours. This
will make less time for real face to face talking. Today for example
, when family members are in one room each one looking at their phone and not talking to each other. So, this
is the first
reason why social interaction is very less.
Today, the option for entertainment on digital phones is not countable. The phone can do many things
like make videos, watch Netflix or talk. Also
, there is so much content for anybody. In old times we used to wait for new
episode for a week but now if we have time we can watch for days non-stop. Add an article
a new
the new
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is like addiction
so Add an article
an addiction
people
are forgetting the real things
and getting lost in digital entertainment. This
is the second
reason for decrease
in live human interaction.
In conclusion, technology has made connections easy but misusing it can be dangerous. I strongly agree that Add an article
the decrease
a decrease
this
can be bad for the future and hence
we have to control else humans will have no emotions like robots.Submitted by Toni R on
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