Social Interaction is getting destroyed due to technology such as mobile phones. Do you agree or disagree?

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All over the world

people

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are using mobile phones for many hours every day. Too many choices of

things

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we can do from the mobile and so

people

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are watching mobile for three or four hours straight. Some

people

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think that real

people

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meeting like twenty years ago and spending time and enjoying is very less. I agree that using mobile phones is a habit for all and is the reason why

people

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do any social interaction. There

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two main reasons and will discuss in the following paragraphs. Social media like Instagram and Facebook is very popular with all age group. The post is updated every few minutes so there are always new

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to watch and

people

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refresh and they watch for many hours.

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will make less time for real face to face talking. Today

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, when family members are in one room each one looking at their phone and not talking to each other. So,

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reason why social interaction is very less. Today, the option for entertainment on digital phones is not countable. The phone can do many

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like make videos, watch Netflix or talk.

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, there is so much content for anybody. In old times we used to wait for

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episode for a week but now if we have time we can watch for days non-stop.

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is like

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people

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are forgetting the real

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and getting lost in digital entertainment.

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reason for

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in live human interaction. In conclusion, technology has made connections easy but misusing it can be dangerous. I strongly agree that

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can be bad for the future and

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we have to control else humans will have no emotions like robots.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

294 words

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Social Interaction is getting destroyed due to technology such as mobile phones. Do you agree or disagree?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

most employers do job interview before offering a position to a person. do you think this is the best way to do it, or are there better alternatives? what is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion?

While travelling by metro train, your credit card slipped out of your pocket. You realized this only after reaching home. Write a letter to the concerned authorities and explain what happened.