nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open play design. why is that? do you see this as a positive or negative development?

The

design

of

buildings

has always been in the interests of people. Nowadays, many properties are built with an open plan

design

such

as offices and educational

buildings

. In

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essay, I will reflect upon the root of

this

change

and argue whether it is beneficial or not. The main reason which could be the cause of

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is

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behaviour of claustrophobia. Studies demonstrate that the fear of tiny places has risen by 15% in the past 5 years.

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, libraries

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are designed in cubicles have much fewer visitors as opposed to the ones in which everyone shares their study area. For

this

reason, owners of public

buildings

have realised

this

issue and prefer to have an open plan

design

, which could be the reason for

this

noticeable

change

. As for its effects, if the trend of the mentioned trait keeps increasing,

then

it would be beneficial to have

buildings

outlined in that manner.

As a result

, being claustrophobic might reduce and everyone will be delighted.

In addition

, the

humans

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mind is designed in a way in which, under stress and dire situations, its performance is significantly reduced.

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, experts suggest

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housing for people who are dealing with an enormous amount of stress.

Therefore

, having an open

design

is

positivepreferred

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positive preferred

. To sum up,

change

in the architecture of the constructions is owing to people's behaviour and needs.