Wild animals have no place in the 21 St century and protection of wild animal is waste of resources.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is very impossible to see a wild animal in our daily life, especially in city lives. Some people think that wild
animals
haven't got a proper place to live in
this
century and we don't need them. So, our work and spendings are unnecessary
to
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protecting
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them. I completely disagree about
this
opinion and think that wild
animals
have to be protected and people have to respect their habitats no matter what.
First
of all, I believe that wild creatures can contribute food chain even if they are located
on
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the top of the pyramid. In nature, all
animals
effect
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with
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each other in
a
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various ways. If one of the wild
animals
is extinct, it has consequences
such
as overpopulation in another animal type.
Moreover
, it can be the result that overuse of some sources
then
scarcity may appear.
Thus
, wild
animals
' hunting patterns impact us and nature in a crucial way.
Secondly
, wild
animals
carry their ancestors' signs and features. Investigating their evolution theory can open a new page
among
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the
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scientist.
For instance
, some treatments are based on
animal's
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herits
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habits
hearts
hermits
and it gives meaning
a
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variety of unknowns.
Furthermore
,
this
researches
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led to new innovations
both
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medical and
genetical
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industries.
In other words
, their appearances and genes enlighten us in
a
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many ways. That's why it is very important to protect wild
animals
for now and future. To conclude, I strongly believe that wild
animals
and their impacts on nature are very key elements to keeping the earth safe because they help to sustain a food chain and investigations on them can carry humanity beyond
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and
also
ancient times.
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