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In the future, all vehicles will be driverless and the only people travelling inside those cars would be passengers.

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In the long run, all vehicles will be
driverless
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 and the only individuals journeying inside those
cars
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would be
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 commuters.
This
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 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
self-driving
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the self-driving
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car
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cars
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. One of the advantages of
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driverless
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the driverless
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car
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 is it is safer. Humans make the mistake
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comparing
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 with technology
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 because they have moods, tiredness, and emotion that
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 their performances and choices.
However
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, some people do not believe that
driverless
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cars
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 are reliable and safer.
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 advantage is, sharing
cars
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 concept is
very
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 effective way to abate the traffic, especially, that during
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rush hour.
For instance
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, in the case of
self-driving
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the self-driving
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car
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cars
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, there is no need to own
it
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them
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. Some special companies can own and rent them for the journey demand of people. There is no doubt for passengers who would use
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vehicles like
cars
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 pool.
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driverless
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cars
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 have
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advantages, they have
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disadvantages as well.
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 disadvantage is no interaction between the driver and passengers,
that
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which
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 means not a good atmosphere in
cabin
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the cabin
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.
In addition
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, in the event of
serious
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problem
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problems
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 for people, it cannot take any action.
Secondly
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, if something
such
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 as engine failure,
tire
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a tire
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broken
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 happen to the
car
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, there is no action until assistance comes. To conclude, if some people’s thought has not
change
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 about
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self-driving
cars
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 being safe, these
cars
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 are already safe and are becoming safer. Reducing
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traffic is
also
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with
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 the environment, if traffic reduces, as well as air pollution will diminish. Even though there are several
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disadvantage, I believe engineers and
scientist
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scientists
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 will overcome the problem
by
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with
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 new
solution
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solutions
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 and technology.

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