In the future, all vehicles will be driverless and the only people travelling inside those cars would be passengers.

In the long run, all vehicles will be

driverless

and the only individuals journeying inside those

cars

would be

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commuters.

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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

self-driving

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car

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. One of the advantages of

driverless

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car

is it is safer. Humans make the mistake

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with technology

,

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because they have moods, tiredness, and emotion that

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their performances and choices.

However

, some people do not believe that

driverless

cars

are reliable and safer.

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advantage is, sharing

cars

concept is

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effective way to abate the traffic, especially, that during

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rush hour.

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, in the case of

self-driving

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car

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, there is no need to own

it

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. Some special companies can own and rent them for the journey demand of people. There is no doubt for passengers who would use

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vehicles like

cars

pool.

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driverless

cars

have

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advantages, they have

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disadvantages as well.

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disadvantage is no interaction between the driver and passengers,

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means not a good atmosphere in

cabin

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.

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, in the event of

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problem

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for people, it cannot take any action.

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, if something

such

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broken

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happen to the

car

, there is no action until assistance comes. To conclude, if some people’s thought has not

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about

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self-driving

cars

being safe, these

cars

are already safe and are becoming safer. Reducing

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traffic is

also

connected

with

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the environment, if traffic reduces, as well as air pollution will diminish. Even though there are several

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disadvantage, I believe engineers and

scientist

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will overcome the problem

by

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new

solution

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and technology.