You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advise about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job what would be suitable for him/her.

Dear Asha, I received your letter 2 days ago,
first
of ,all I congratulate you on successfully completing your schooling level and related to that later I want to suggest that you should get a job because you have so many responsibilities to perform for your family
moreover
the time is
also
an issue for you even you have to manage task related to the course so, I think
that is
sometimes difficult for you.
In addition
, I know you face lots of financial crises
although
have to earn money for sundry expenses , getting a job is the best option for the solution to your all problems because you have to chance to raise funding for your daily needs. Admittedly, It helps you to improve your skills and experience.
Finally
, In my company 2 vacant places for receptionists so, I would like to advise you to apply for the placement because it gives you the best package of salary and not have to pressure of any deadline even
this
will improve your confidence and skill of communication. Best regards, Hemal
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