You have borrowed something from you friend, and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Dear Zoe, I am very sorry about the canon

camera

that I borrowed from you had been spoiled because of me. Sorry, it is taken me so long to

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you why I hadn’t returned to you. To be honest, I’ve been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you and I damaged it accidentally. I know how it is important for you and it is the only gift that you received from your mother before she passed away.

Moreover

, your family photos especially you were on vacation when your mother was alive were saved in

this

camera

. What happen is that

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I went to the Golden Temple which is one of the famous temples that had been established by gold with my family and it is beautiful. I took the

camera

to capture beautiful memories when we were in

this

temple. There was no problem when I used it on the

first

day of the trip,

however

, I got inadvertently hit form a boy even

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lost my control and fell down on a floor along with the

camera

on the

second

day of the trip. Because of a misfortune event, the

camera

’s body got damaged. I have spoken to the authorized dealers of the canon’s service centre to repair it nicely as soon as I get back to my hometown. Fortunately, they informed me that the replacement of the body is working without affecting the functionality. Now it should be as good as new and I will send it on to you

next

week. Again, I deeply apologise for damaging it and taking

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time to return it to you. I hope you can forgive me. Warm Regards Sandar Myint