You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. ‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
It is often argued that
people
who fail in something is meant they did not try their best to get it done. I totally disagree with this
point of view as most of the failures
are the result of over assessment and lack
of experience
rather than poor desire
.
First
of all, Many failures
may be caused by a lack
of experience
. It is true that many people
work very hard and high focus on the projects
or works that they take and handle. However
, lack
of experience
in preparation, deployment, and management as well as less adaptive and alternative to the changes in conditions might lead to the failures
. For example
, the start-up is the trend of young people
recently, although
they are passionate about their ideas and work day and night hardly to make it become successful projects
. However
, research showed that more than ninety per cent of start-up projects
fail due to a lack
of experience
in management .
Furthermore
, inadequate and over-assessment is another key factor of failure rather than poor desire
. Indeed, many young people
are too confident that they over assess their works and projects
inadequately. Consequently
, these works and projects
are mostly failed despite the desire
of owners to spend on them. For instance
, although
spending a lot of money on marketing, much well-known coffee brands still fails in the Vietnam market due to inadequate research on the habit of consumers.
In conclusion, people
always have a strong desire
for what they are responsible for, most failures
come from the lack
of experience
and the inadequate over-assessments of the owner. However
, there is still poor attempt that makes the work or project fail.Submitted by kennybk04 on
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