You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. ‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is often argued that

people

Use synonyms

who fail in something is meant they did not try their best to get it done. I totally disagree with

this

Linking Words

point of view as most of the

failures

Use synonyms

are the result of over assessment and

lack

Use synonyms

of

experience

Use synonyms

rather than poor

desire

Use synonyms

.

First

Linking Words

of all, Many

failures

Use synonyms

may be caused by a

lack

Use synonyms

of

experience

Use synonyms

. It is true that many

people

Use synonyms

work very hard and high focus on the

projects

Use synonyms

or works that they take and handle.

However

Linking Words

,

lack

Use synonyms

of

experience

Use synonyms

in preparation, deployment, and management as well as less adaptive and alternative to the changes in conditions might lead to the

failures

Use synonyms

.

For example

Linking Words

, the start-up is the trend of young

people

Use synonyms

recently,

although

Linking Words

they are passionate about their ideas and work day and night hardly to make it become successful

projects

Use synonyms

.

However

Linking Words

, research showed that more than ninety per cent of start-up

projects

Use synonyms

fail due to a

lack

Use synonyms

of

experience

Use synonyms

in management .

Furthermore

Linking Words

, inadequate and over-assessment is another key factor of failure rather than poor

desire

Use synonyms

. Indeed, many young

people

Use synonyms

are too confident that they over assess their works and

projects

Use synonyms

inadequately.

Consequently

Linking Words

, these works and

projects

Use synonyms

are mostly failed despite the

desire

Use synonyms

of owners to spend on them.

For instance

Linking Words

,

although

Linking Words

spending a lot of money on marketing, much well-known coffee brands still fails in the Vietnam market due to inadequate research on the habit of consumers. In conclusion,

people

Use synonyms

always have a strong

desire

Use synonyms

for what they are responsible for, most

failures

Use synonyms

come from the

lack

Use synonyms

of

experience

Use synonyms

and the inadequate over-assessments of the owner.

However

Linking Words

, there is still poor attempt that makes the work or project fail.