An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while other things people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

Nowadays with technology ,progress it becomes various ways more than pervious .There are two views , some
people
believe that increasing
people
on the using the
internet
to meet a new
people
and socialise ,and others believe that
people
close but while other things
people
are more isolated . I am going to discuss these views and give my opinion. The
first
form , the
internet
communicates easily between different
people
. Most
people
are social causes communicate
for instance
, according to a study say that the
internet
makes more
people
know more think by 80% even schools and university put online course and homework , on the other ,handsome courses it sent to site every student . I believe the
internet
easy community between students and teachers.
Also
, some companies lead to attendance more employment of pervious .
However
, Google company it creat sites for meetings and socialites.
For instance
, simply
this
is extremely known to the learner .
Also
through
this
,period enormous extremely in use of the network.
On the other hand
, all individuals it became busier , the sites and programs are more useful. Even the children it is extremely lonely and does not like to play with friends .Because of some devices and ,
,
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there are players automatic almost 80 % of children it isolated because of tablets and mobile phones.
This
is the problem in some categories of society and should look at
this
issue . In conclusion, I believe the ratio of
people
in society is very interesting on the
internet
and it has many friends on the
internet
.
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