Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Generally,In
schools
, the students are prepared for how to earn their living in future.
Therefore
, certain individuals argued that the
schools
do not educate young ones, on how to care for their
health
.
However
, I partially agree with
this
notion. The
first
reason why I support
this
notion is extra curriculum activities offered by
schools
for the overall development of the younger generation.It has been seen that there are many
schools
where students are taught different types of sports, games and other activities like horse riding, swimming , dancing and many more.All these curriculum activities demand good
health
in order to participate in them.
Hence
, the students are motivated to look after their
health
.
For example
, there are many interschool sports competitions are held by the
schools
and children are given coaches who teach them various techniques related to the game and
also
they make a suitable diet chart for them telling them what is good for their
health
and what is not.
On the other hand
, there is no proper module at the school level through which young people could learn various common issues about human fitness and how to treat them effectively.
For example
, subjects like 'Nutrition and Diet' should be compulsory subjects at the school level so that the young generation is aware of their well-being and diet.To illustrate, in some countries, most young people are drug addicts and if they had some knowledge about the consequences of the drugs
then
they had never taken the drugs.
Therefore
, the young ones should be taught how to care for their
health
in
schools
. In conclusion, the
schools
are making efforts to make their young ones healthy ,but, unfortunately, they are lacking in giving information about
health
care.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health education
  • Curriculum
  • Healthy lifestyle
  • Diet
  • Exercise
  • Mental health
  • Hygiene
  • Practical skills
  • Responsibility
  • Collaboration
  • Long-term benefits
  • Reduced healthcare costs
  • Academic performance
  • Well-being
  • Comprehensive health programs
  • Positive outcomes
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