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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#people #risks #support
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people
 are adventurous and willing to take probability rather than doing things or routines which they are familiar with.
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 my perspective, I strongly agree with
this
 statement. Let me explain with some examples.
Firstly
, successful
people
 have a strong will, they don't give up easily. They will try numerous times until they have some results.
For example
, the famous person who brought light to the world
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 was Thomas Edison. Thomas Edison tries to figure out a more convenient way to have vision during the night apart from using candles. Due to
this
 reason, he starts experimenting the incandescent light using carbide tungsten. Numerous failures did not stop Edison from omitting
this
 project. At
last
, he successfully invents the light bulb that contributes to our
society
 until today.
Secondly
, well-
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people
 have long foreseeability, they will not settle for normal. Bill Gates,
co-founder
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 of Microsoft,is a very successful American businessman. With his invention, he speeds up the technology of the 20th Century, making
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life in
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society
 easy.
Initially
, he started up with his friend at a rented, old garage. He didn't give up despite numerous failures and pressure from
society
. He foresees that Microsoft will benefits
society
 and he did succeed after being rejected by numerous companies. In conclusion, I strongly agree that successful
people
 will never be satisfied with the current peaceful condition, they will take risks and big steps overhead to achieve what they desire .
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