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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be made instead. -Do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 present-day world, it has to be said that planting
trees
 in urban areas is more important than building housing facilities whereas, others oppose
this
 view.Global warming and ozone depletion are the major problems facing these days.In order to curtail
this
 situation, we have to plant
trees
 in urban areas
instead
 of building shelters.I agree with
this
 notion and
this
 essay will enunciate my agreement in detail with appropriate examples. To commence with , it is indeed an irrefutable fact that the environment has been polluted day by day from the carbon emissions of vehicles and industries;planting
trees
 can be declined
this
 situation to an extent.To cite an example, a piece of news was published by the Hindu Newspaper about global warming and its negative outcomes.Every year, our earth's temperature has increased up to 1-degree Celsius and it may pave the way for melting arctic and antarctic glaciers; leading to a flood.In the light of relevance, the officialdom has been started to support electric vehicles rather than fuel vehicles.Apart from that, authorities are trying to build man-made forests in urban areas. To continue , it is paramount to consider the protection of irreversible resources.Global warming not only resulted in floods but
also
 creates clean water unavailability.At
this
 juncture,planting
trees
 have paramount importance to maintaining the earth without any natural calamities.
For instance
,a study was conducted by Toronto University about the importance of
trees
 to
decline
Wrong verb form
declining
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 global warming.The result shows about 80% of co2 is converted into oxygen by the photosynthesis process.In the light of
this
 relevance, most developed countries have started to plant
trees
 than in the bygone days. In conclusion , it has been proven that
trees
 can convert c02 emissions into oxygen and decline global warming.
Moreover
, it is imperative to follow in the future
also
.
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