Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own pinion.

Nowadays, there is much controversy over the continuity of studying from schools to universities. While some people are promoting the idea that one year gap is

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in between, others consider the

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start of universities. I am convinced that the former idea might result in a better outcome. The following essay will look at both views followed by my notion. On one hand,

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between these periods might help pupils to find themselves.

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is because it can provide a good free

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for them to take a look into different professions, which leads to choosing their future career wisely.

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, Medicine might be enticing for many students;

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, many of them change their idea after having an accurate understanding

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it by spending

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volunteering at hospitals.

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, by spending enough

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without the stress of

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responsibilities, the

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generation can find their interest and enter a field

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compatible with their

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characteristics

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, an eighteen-year-old human can easily get distracted

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enjoyable activities and deviated from the main purpose of

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opportunity.

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, many might get hired in

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jobs and find their incomes enough for their expenses and leisure

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and decide not to continue their studying while they might be more successful people if have postgraduation diplomas. Since

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age group

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not usually think ahead, they will regret a lot of their previous decisions.

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, I believe that for having a productive and contributive community with high job satisfaction, offering

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opportunity should be done with strict supervision and in-advance guiding education to avoid any deviation. To sum up, a year between schools and universities can help students find the best career based on their

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.

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,

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can encourage them to drop

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education.

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, if they get prepared for

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, it can result in a better future generation.