Writ a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include what the gift is Why you choose it how it will be delivered

Dear John, I hope you and your family are fine at your new home.I'm really glad that you have
finally
bought your dream house.I'm sending you a present for good luck with your latest accommodation.
This
is a statue of Lord Budha which I bought from an online e-commerce App .It's made of pure iron with a gold colour coating on it and it's 30cm long.It has radium on its head which shine in the dark. Since you are a devotee of Lord Budha
therefore
, I thought it will be the perfect gift for you.
Moreover
,
this
statue is considered to provide calm and happiness, what else do we want from the place where we live? I have purchased
this
from Amazon and
this
will be delivered
next
Sunday to your new place as
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have mentioned your name and address while ordering it.You don't need to pay delivery charges even because I have already paid ,
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however
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you need to show your identity when a delivery person comes to deliver it. I hope you'll like it and wish you all the best . Best Regards, Sourabh .
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