Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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becomes a difficult task when there exists a controversy

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to give preference to its

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functionality. I feel both the aspects should be looked upon, but in most cases, the

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aspect can be given more preference. When analysing the merits of designing a

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beautiful, the best is the impressive life a

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resident can get rather than adjusting

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busy and hectic life. To be precise, an individual would feel refreshed and rejuvenated even after a tiresome work in a

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with ample space for gardens, parks and specially designed buildings.

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sort of emotional well-being can be hardly found in cities filled with just concrete jungles, mostly appearing the same, the

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group says.

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, others feel that

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should give priority to

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pressing demands of the

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dwellers than

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means priority needs of the urban population have to be addressed, and for

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the available space of the cities should be utilized in the most rational way. To be clearer,

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of wasting a sizeable area of cities for constructing parks and gardens, it can be utilized to build schools, colleges and hospitals, which would benefit more

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residents. In my opinion, the primary function of a

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is to satisfy the needs of its residents.

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, when designing a

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, more focus should be given to its functionality than its

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. To conclude, it is clear that both the aspects:

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and functionality have to be considered before planning a

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.

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, I feel the

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option weighs more.