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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one. Give reasons for your examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, modern high-technologies are in demand like handphones which are the top seller in the market
that
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even young child has their own. In
this
 case, there are numerous universities in the country that do not allow the students to bring their handphones during classes hours
instead
 they are advised to keep them in the locker. I strongly believe that
this
 is a positive development for every generation.
To begin
 with, the average usage of a cellular
phone
 in some schools totally rises up by the year 2020.
Therefore
, some people insist that less mobile
phone
 access can improve excellent learning for
children
 because it is fewer destructions and they can focus the class properly.
For instance
,
children
 may easily disturb when their mobile
phone
 is with them and once a notification beeps they will be destructed, they will look through their mobile
phone
 and if
this
 happens the attention span is not wide enough for them.
As a result
, students may be able to focus on their studies and it will help them to gain more knowledge.
In addition
, less access to cellular phones can promote
children
's good health due to less exposure to the sensor light . One of the reasons is the pro-long usage of
this
 gadget, the brightness of the screen can damage your eyes, so people must aware of it and refrain from using it.
For example
, many parents have been buying these gadgets for
children
 and if they are doing their laundry and they just allow the young people to watch youtube or movies so that kids will behave while the mother is busy with her house choir. And in my, perspective all mothers should know the cause and effect of handphones if it's fine allowing the
children
 to use them during the early stage. I conclude that less entry into the mobile
phone
 in the class is a great way to help young adults to gain more knowledge and to prevent some illnesses as well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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