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What are the differences and similarities of the weather between two cities you know

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Hanoi
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 and Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 City are the
two
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 largest cities in Viet Nam. Those
two
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 cities are located in
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 geographical locations quite far apart, so there are some
differences
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 and similarities in climate. There are many
differences
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 between the weather in
Hanoi
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 and Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 City. The
first
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 difference is the seasons.
Hanoi
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 has four seasons: spring, summer, autumn and winter.
In contrast
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, Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 City has only
two
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 seasons: the dry season and the rainy season.
Hanoi
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’s climate is classified as humid subtropical, dry winter, whereas Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 has a tropical wet and dry or savanna climate.
Hanoi
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 generally has cooler weather than Ho
Chi
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Minh
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. The average
temperature
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 in
Hanoi
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 is 25.99 °C while Ho
Chi
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Minh
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’s
temperature
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 is 29.43 °C.
Hanoi
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 is hottest in June when the average
temperature
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 may reach 32.24 °C. Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 is hottest in April when the average
temperature
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 is 31.74 °C.
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,
Hanoi
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 has about 2.03 times less rainfall than Ho
Chi
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Minh
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.
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 there are many
differences
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 between those
two
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 places, there are
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 some similarities. These
two
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 cities Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 and
Hanoi
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 are both coldest in January. Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 and
Hanoi
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 are seasonal rain. It
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 rains a lot in both
two
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 places. Because of the location, Ho
Chi
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Minh
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 and Ha Noi have
differences
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 and similarities

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