Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to a university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
fast-growing world
everyone has Add a comma
,world
right
to acquire knowledge, whereas many Correct article usage
the right
people
claim that it should be free of cost for all medium of individuals. This
essay will highlight that the
certainly is a rational approach that needs to Correct your spelling
this
be opted
.
Change to the active voice
opt
have opted
First
of all, I believe that knowledge is a
power and using Remove the article
apply
these
power we can fight Correct determiner usage
this
with
all circumstances in life. Government should make it free for all students because all Change preposition
apply
are
have Unnecessary verb
apply
Add an article
a dream
dream
to become something in the future. Fix the agreement mistake
dreams
For instance
, many poor people
are not having a
sufficient money to spend on their children and they end up Remove the article
apply
to do
labour work or Change the verb form
doing
converted
into a criminal. That's whyWrong verb form
converting
,
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apply
administration
give Correct article usage
the administration
opportunity
to them and make Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
education
cost free
.
Add a hyphen
cost-free
Secondly
, if more and more people
educate our nation will be also
strong and become one of the best literate country
. Change to a plural noun
countries
However
, some individuals are not having great
Change the article
a great
job
because of Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
low
Correct article usage
a low
degree
and they do not have much more money to pay the fees for Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
Correct article usage
a master
master
degree. Change noun form
master's
For example
, if a student is graduate
they will only get Change the article
a graduate
normal
Add an article
a normal
job
with low
salary , but if they gain much more knowledge they tend to do Correct article usage
a low
job
in high profile Add an article
the job
job
in Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
large
Add an article
a large
company
. But for Fix the agreement mistake
companies
this
council department should take action on it and make it free of cost education
so, students can do higher education
. As a result
, it is very beneficial for student's
.
To conclude, I strongly agree that government should give free Change the noun form
students
student
education
to all medium of students and it is very vital for our nation because it makes people
happy and motivated to do something in future.Submitted by aashiyanakhanushiya26 on
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