Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to a university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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everyone has
right
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to acquire knowledge, whereas many
people
claim that it should be free of cost for all medium of individuals.
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certainly is a rational approach that needs to
be opted
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.
First
of all, I believe that knowledge is
a
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power and using
these
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power we can fight
with
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all circumstances in life. Government should make it free for all students because all
are
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have
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a dream
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dream
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to become something in the future.
For instance
, many poor
people
are not having
a
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sufficient money to spend on their children and they end up
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labour work or
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into a criminal. That's why
,
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administration
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give
opportunity
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to them and make
education
cost free
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.
Secondly
, if more and more
people
educate our nation will be
also
strong and become one of the best literate
country
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.
However
, some individuals are not having
great
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job
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because of
low
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a low
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degree
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and they do not have much more money to pay the fees for
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a master
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master
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degree.
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, if a student is
graduate
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they will only get
normal
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job
with
low
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salary , but if they gain much more knowledge they tend to do
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in high profile
job
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in
large
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a large
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company
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. But for
this
council department should take action on it and make it free of cost
education
so, students can do higher
education
.
As a result
, it is very beneficial for
student's
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. To conclude, I strongly agree that government should give free
education
to all medium of students and it is very vital for our nation because it makes
people
happy and motivated to do something in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • Accessibility
  • Social mobility
  • Meritocracy
  • Economic growth
  • Equality
  • Subsidize
  • Fiscal sustainability
  • Human capital
  • Incentivize
  • Underfunded
  • Tuition fees
  • Academic achievement
  • Workforce
  • Tax burden
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