As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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which bring some favour for their own in some extent,

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trend for individuals outweighs the drawbacks for habitat. on the one hand, the pace of

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life and increase in transportation have become so fast that the population had to work hard and keep up to date with it .

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invented a plethora of transport modes leading to their means being more inexpensive price.

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, there are so many conveniences for people and communities.

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trend seems to grow in up car industry and related industrial fields . It would create job opportunities for labour and strengthen the nation`s economy.

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European statistics, the number of produced

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to 3 million

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each year during a decade.

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there are many hazards associated with the number of increasing automobile users like polluted air and

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from automobile manufacturers and

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. That tremendously affects the folks , species on the planet and the earth and

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air-borne diseases for

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and animals like asthma and respiratory diseases.

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energy consumption in private transport

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a huge number of greenhouse emissions to the environment and atmosphere .

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means the government must spend a

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problem. In conclusion,raising the figure of used

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can develop the economy and bring some benefits

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populations

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the outweighed advantages of

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trend should be considered by individuals and nations in the world