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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

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Introduction
They are a lot of
houses
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building
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buildings
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long
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history
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 to find out the
history
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of
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behind that instruction. In
this
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easy
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 we will discuss the reasons why
people
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 like to find out the
history
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for
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 the building
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they
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the
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they
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live
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 in, and the different
way
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ways
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 they can follow to find out the
history
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 they looking for.
Body paragraph 1
In
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one
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the one
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houses
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 in Denmark are old
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 and have
history
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example
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 the house that I live in now
it
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is from 1960 and I am so
interest
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 to find out more about it. The
reasons
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 to find it out
because
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 the instruction of the house
it
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is so different and small and made from old stone and
have
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has
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old
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the old
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Body paragraph 2
In
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other hand
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, there is
different
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on
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the
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about
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of
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houses
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 or building you are interested in.
first
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historical
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the historical
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 book, when you
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read
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ready
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read
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history
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about
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 the country
the
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they
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 mention a lot how the old
people
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building
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built
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houses
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 or building or
the
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they the reason the building it.
Second
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 to
generation
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, older
people
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telling
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tell
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history
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 of the
houses
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the
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 living in.
Conclusion
In conclusion,
to find
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finding
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 out the
history
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 of the
houses
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building
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buildings
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 is becoming more interested
to
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in
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people
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. And there is sever way to find out the
history
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 of the building, from the historical book or from story going from
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 to
generation
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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