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When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?

#face #life
everyone must
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have
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face
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 some problems at different stages of life. it does not
matter
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weather
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 it is a difficult
one
 or the simple
one
. everyone
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 their own
way
 to deal with them. In my opinion, I feel the best
way
 to solve
difficult
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problem
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 in life
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is by
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 asking someone with more
experience
 for advice about the problem. I feel
this
way
 for two reasons, which I will explore in
this
 essay.
to begin
 with, I
contened
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contend
 that, the people with more
experience
 will naturally have more understanding of the issue. so, for better understanding, I would like to take advice from them. my own personal
experience
 is a compelling example of
this
. in my
office
 once I got stuck in
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 issue related to customer satisfaction. our company used to make
electrical
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an electrical
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 appliance for
kitchen
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the kitchen
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. from the
last
one
 month we regularly
receving
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receiving
complains
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 regarding their
maintainness
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maintained
maintains
. my boss asked to
to
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solve the issue, being new in my work, I was taking much time to solve that.
then
 I asked
to
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my senior, how to solve the
matter
 at the earliest. He understood the
matter
 better than
me
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, because of his
experince
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experience
experiences
.
also
, give me a better solution to solve the
matter
, in
one
 day the problem was sorted out. I feel glad for his help.
secondly
,
the
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patience
. I personally
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believe
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belive
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 the people with more
experience
 will surely have more
patience
in
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 them. since with
time
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 they have learned the skill of having
patience
 in any situation.
for instance
, on the
way
 to my
office
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 there is
lot
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 of traffic. when I go to
office
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the office
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, I usually got stuck in
the
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traffice
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traffic
 and got late
on
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every day.
one
 day my father was going with me. he has some work in the bank, I decide to drop him
first
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to
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at
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 the bank
than
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then
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 will move on to my
office
. on the
way
, again we
stuck
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 in the traffic. I was getting
annoyned
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annoyed
for
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 the traffic and feeling bad for again reaching
office
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the office
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 late. my father saw
my
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this
 behaviour and tell me to get cool down. he advised me in
such
situation
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 you should either start earlier from home or change your timings.
there
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patience
 changed my situation, as I started to leave earlier from home. in a nutshell, I strongly believe that, with good understanding and
patience
, it is always good to get advice from
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an experienced
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 person.
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  • Conclusion

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