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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir, Good day! I am a regular customer of your bookshop, and recently I saw the posting that you are searching for a guest speaker.
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, I am writing
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 letter to recommend my instructor from the University of
Philippines
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. You can email him through
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 account [email protected].
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 Bean Grahams has been teaching the school for more than a decade, his excellence in public speaking and debate has garnered awards annually in Public Speaking of the Year, an annual event.
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, his debating skills are far more outstanding
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 is acknowledged in national news. I believe, he possesses the qualifications you need
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 the upcoming event. Can you imagine an example of a good local in our community? Who would not want to hear him right? He had published many inspirational and educational books and been a coach
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 many successful people.
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, he is born and raised here in the city. Everybody will be thrilled to know him, as I am. Hoping you will notice
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 email and consider my suggestion. Respectfully yours,
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