Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir ,
Firstly
, please let me introduce myself .
This
is Mee Mee who is currently working as a sales engineer in one of the IT products selling
company
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. Literally , the main reason
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letter is that I saw your advertisement posted in The Opportunity Journal a couple of days ago. As I am a technology fanatic ,
this
computer course really draws my attention. Honestly ,
although
I am not coming from
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computing background ,
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field is not far from me because of touching technological products in my work on a daily basis.
Moreover
, being a self-motivated learner , I always learn from
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. In spite of not having formal certificates , I am pretty confident about my computing knowledge
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can be more than your minimum requirement , an elementary course.
Accordingly
, you can understand my current situation. I am utterly passionate to register
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computer course .
Therefore
, could you please kindly consider me
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for it as a special exception?
Furthermore
, if you want me to sit for an entrance , I am ready to have a try. Thank you for your kind consideration in advance. Yours faithfully, Mee Mee
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