Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn wore about the importance of the natural world?
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The majority
people
do not appreciate natural surroundings and do not understand their significance. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will discuss Linking Words
reasons
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the reasons
of
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for
irresponsibility
of Add an article
the irresponsibility
people
to our living world and the ways to make Use synonyms
people
notice the importance of Use synonyms
natural
world.
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the natural
People
have been using different natural resources for their convenience since ancient times. Use synonyms
For instance
, the production of paper from the trees or the utilization of Linking Words
the
fossil fuels Correct article usage
apply
such
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as
us
the coals and the natural gases to provide heat. The population accustom to always getting and taking the recurses from the flora since they believe that everything belongs to them. Correct your spelling
as
Furthermore
, the needs of the population increase with the development of the technologies.
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selfishness
of the nation Add an article
the selfishness
lead
to the pollution of our environment and reduction of the plenty stuffs Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
such
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our
us
forests and lakes. Correct your spelling
as
For example
, one of the largest lakes Aral Sea in Kazakhstan is disappearing. It decreased approximately by 50 Linking Words
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
People
will notice the condition of the land if there will be more advertisements Use synonyms
such
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as
us
the videos and the banners about Correct your spelling
as
the
nature. If Correct article usage
apply
person
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a person
see
the pollution of nature every day on TV or on Change the verb form
sees
banner
while walking, Add an article
a banner
then
he will think about the condition of the environment constantly. Linking Words
Moreover
, they should spend one day of each Linking Words
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month
moth
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month
to take
care of the flora and teach kids to do that from their childhood.
In conclusion, nowadays a lot of Change the verb form
taking
citizenries
do not pay attention to the state of the Earth. Replace the word
citizens
However
, as long as each person will begin to make Linking Words
own
contribution to Correct pronoun usage
their own
his own
her own
the
nature protection the situation will Correct article usage
apply
be
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apply
change
.Correct your spelling
changed
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