Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

Many
people
say that
music
transcends boundary and create a pleasant atmosphere for folk from distant ethnicities and generations.Indeed, there are many reasons to support
this
thought.
However
,I oppose
this
idea which I will explain the reason for in
this
upcoming essay.
To begin
with, it seems simplistic to say that musical notes tend to soothe our body and mind, subtly inducing a sense of delight.
For instance
,
people
can forget about their turmoil and be content after listening to Mozart's songs.
Additionally
,
music
concerts and events lure masses from different parts of the globe and corral them together that could extend for a few days and allow
people
to know each other better, eventually bringing them closer, clear differences and developing togetherness. As the
last
point, Youtube and many social media apps have made songs available to anyone with a smartphone.
This
, in turn, sets a platform to share emotions and promote globalization.
Nevertheless
,
music
has a multi-category
such
as rock, country, and Electronic Dance
Music
(EDM) ,
people
from distinct stages of life can have a serape feeling when they hear a particular song.
For example
, teenagers and youngsters experience an adrenaline rush while listening to Rock or EDM. When they relish, older
people
would certainly feel disturbed by
such
loud noises.In some extreme cases,
this
genre of
music
can be fatal to senior citizens
such
as permanent hearing loss or losing focus ability.
Therefore
, it cannot be generalized that distinct generations would opt for the same genre. To sum up,
people
from different cultures are bought together by
music
but the same cannot be stated for
people
of different ages. I complete
disagreeing
Change the form of the verb
disagree
show examples
with
this
statement because
music
cannot always suit
people
of different ages
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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