plastic bags bottles and plastic packaging are bad foreign environment. But damage does plastic do to the environment and what steps do government and individuals can take to solve this problem

it is argued that
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plastic
packets,
plastic
carry
bags
and
plastic
bottles are harmful
for
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the atmosphere because it contaminates the soil and
also
impact
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impacts
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badly
on
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rivers oceans and seas. To tackle
this
problem, the
government
should put restrictions on
plastic
and humans have to carry jute and paper
bags
. to commence with, the major
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effects
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affects
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effects
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of
plastic
on the
environment
is that it deteriorates the beauty of
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the surrounding
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surrounding
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surroundings
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.
people
do not follow the rules and
regulation
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regulations
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that are amended by the
government
for
smooth
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running of society. In big cities, it is clearly mentioned on the hoardings that 'do not throw
plastic
',
however
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,however
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the masses still throw
plastic
there.
Moreover
,
individual
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individuals
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throw the waste
plastic
in
oceans
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the oceans
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as well which is
the
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significant cause of
dying
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the dying
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out of aquatic
animals
because they eat that thresh to
site
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an example, many
environment
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environments
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list
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found that
extinction
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the extinction
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of water
animals
is due to the cause that
animals
eat
plastic
.
consequently
,
plastic
pollutes say
environment
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the environment
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and
also
the biggest cause of extinction of aquatic
animals
The
government
hasto
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has to
take some measures to tackle
this
problem.
Firstly
the authority should aware the public about
the wars impacts
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the war's impacts
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of
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plastic
by conducting seminars in which they
they
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encourage
the
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people
to
use
jute and paper
bags
full stop
in addition
, the
government
have to put
penalty
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a penalty
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on that
personswho
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persons who
person who
use
plastic
bags
.
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Further more
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it is not only the responsibility of the higher authority
where as
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whereas
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individual
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individuals
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should take some steps
such
as the
people
have to avoid
plastic
bag
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bags
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and the masses have to recycle that
plastic
bags
if they
use
it
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them
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. It not only
protect
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see
environment
but
also
assists
people
to keep themselves away from diseases that are caused by
plastic
.
For example
, if any mankind by water bottle from
shop
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the shop
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, he should recycle it by using that
plastic
bottle in their
homefull
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home full
hopefully
stop
people
can
use
plastic
in many ways like planting small trees in it and
use
plastic
bottles for freezing water full stop
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as a result
it is vividly clear that if mankind can take some steps , they can save themselves from the harmful effects of
plastic
.
Inconclusion
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it is an
undeliable
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undeniable
unreliable
factor that
plastic
is harmful
for
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health
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the health
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of humans and
animals
as well as hazardous
for
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to
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the
environment
,
nevertheless
if the authority and individuals take some prominent steps, they can survive in a good
environment
.
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