plastic bags bottles and plastic packaging are bad foreign environment. But damage does plastic do to the environment and what steps do government and individuals can take to solve this problem

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it is argued that
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plastic
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packets,
plastic
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carry
bags
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and
plastic
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bottles are harmful
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the atmosphere because it contaminates the soil and
also
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impact
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badly
on
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rivers oceans and seas. To tackle
this
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problem, the
government
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should put restrictions on
plastic
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and humans have to carry jute and paper
bags
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. to commence with, the major
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effects
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affects
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effects
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of
plastic
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on the
environment
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is that it deteriorates the beauty of
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the surrounding
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surrounding
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surroundings
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.
people
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do not follow the rules and
regulation
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regulations
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that are amended by the
government
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for
smooth
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running of society. In big cities, it is clearly mentioned on the hoardings that 'do not throw
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however
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the masses still throw
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there.
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,
individual
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individuals
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throw the waste
plastic
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in
oceans
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the oceans
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as well which is
the
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significant cause of
dying
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the dying
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out of aquatic
animals
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because they eat that thresh to
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cite
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an example, many
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environment
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environments
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list
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found that
extinction
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the extinction
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of water
animals
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is due to the cause that
animals
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eat
plastic
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.
consequently
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,
plastic
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pollutes say
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environment
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the environment
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and
also
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the biggest cause of extinction of aquatic
animals
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The
government
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hasto
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has to
take some measures to tackle
this
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problem.
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the authority should aware the public about
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of
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plastic
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by conducting seminars in which they
they
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encourage
the
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people
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to
use
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jute and paper
bags
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full stop
in addition
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, the
government
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have to put
penalty
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on that
personswho
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persons who
person who
use
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plastic
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bags
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.
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it is not only the responsibility of the higher authority
where as
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individual
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individuals
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should take some steps
such
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as the
people
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have to avoid
plastic
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bag
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bags
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and the masses have to recycle that
plastic
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bags
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if they
use
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it
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them
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. It not only
protect
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see
environment
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but
also
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assists
people
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to keep themselves away from diseases that are caused by
plastic
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.
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, if any mankind by water bottle from
shop
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the shop
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, he should recycle it by using that
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bottle in their
homefull
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home full
hopefully
stop
people
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can
use
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plastic
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in many ways like planting small trees in it and
use
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plastic
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bottles for freezing water full stop
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it is vividly clear that if mankind can take some steps , they can save themselves from the harmful effects of
plastic
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.
Inconclusion
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it is an
undeliable
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undeniable
unreliable
factor that
plastic
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is harmful
for
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to
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health
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the health
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of humans and
animals
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as well as hazardous
for
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the
environment
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,
nevertheless
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if the authority and individuals take some prominent steps, they can survive in a good
environment
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.
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