Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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It is argued that few persons pass most of the phase of their
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where they were born.
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of living in the same city where they were birthed
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the drawback entailed by
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state of affair, as spending most of their time at the same location generally creates a bond between friends, as well as
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are fully aware of the locality, which helps them to sustain. The most cited disadvantage of
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lifestyle adaptation is that they get stuck in a
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nut shell
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along with the new emerging technologies, and
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the global lifestyle
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upgraded compared to living in the same place.
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means that there is
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less chance to meet and experience the multi-culture, which results in limiting one to a very basic
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routine. A person,
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in the countryside, would never be able to encounter the
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facilities which are available in the city. Despite
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, there are a number of significant benefits to living in the same place of birth.
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of all,
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develop a strong bonding
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others with whom they grow up and spend most of
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time.
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, they get
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strong support in all stages of their
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, especially during emergency medical conditions. Another reason
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is that they are fully aware of their surroundings.
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is because, they have seen all the development of their locality from their birth, so it’s probably easy for them to survive. To cite an example, people have full knowledge of the availability of the schools, groceries, and hospitals at the time of need. In conclusion,
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there are certain drawbacks of staying in the same location where they were born, it is clear that staying in
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place would have significant benefits in maintaining
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relationships and a way to live a less complex
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Settlement
  • Hometown
  • Roots
  • Community
  • Emotional attachment
  • Sense of familiarity
  • Social network
  • Bond
  • Safety
  • Proximity
  • Support system
  • Heritage
  • Limited options
  • Risk aversion
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Unfamiliarity
  • Exploration
  • Adventurous spirit
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