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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a wast of time. Discuss both sides and give yout opinion.

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Art is not only painting and sculpting, it is much more than that. It could be music, dancing, acting or could even be writing or presenting and much more than that. In my
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 it is important at schools to have it as an essential to discover
childeren's
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 talents and skills, which is very
improtant
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. When a talent or a skill is discovered
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 early
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 it is always easier to develop it,
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, the talent will grow with the child and become something professional he does. As a suggestion, I believe that art in schools should be divided
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 many subjects and each kid should be tested on which subject is suiting him the most.
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, teachers should expose all youngsters to all art subjects and pay good attention to each one's skill or talent and help them to discover more about themselves. Schools are not only for learning academic subjects, they are
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 for learning new skills and talents and being able to communicate with others and discover more about yourself as a person.
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, having a hobby or an
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 studying is very
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 because when you feel yourself achieving and successful in something you love it gives you a great push to be successful in other things you do in life.
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