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People say that a country will benefit greatly if students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, a large section of learners
going
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 to
another countries
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another country
other countries
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 for
their
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 better
education
 and future.
However
, few individuals opine that it will be
beneficial
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 immensely to a nation if the
students
 go to aboard for their higher
education
. I personally, fully agree with the given statement and my views will be discussed in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there are
number
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a number
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 of advantages if pupils will go to another
country
 for
there
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their
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further
 studies.
Firstly
, it will help
to
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a
country
 to get knowledgeable
employees
 in the
further
 because
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in
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developed countries,
they
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give more emphasis on practical knowledge rather than theoretical.
Therefore
,
students
 get more knowledge accurately.
For example
, In
canada
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Canada
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 nursing
students
 spend more than 8 hours daily in clinics rather than in
classroom
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the classroom
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 and their teachers educate them
live
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to live
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;
therefore
, they get more exposure to their field and in
future
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,future
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 they work for their countries very well.
Hence
, it will be very beneficial for their
country
 to get more knowledgeable
employees
 in future.
Moreover
, the nation will
be get
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 more multi-skilled
employees
 who will have more confidence and
able
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 to deal with different cultural people.
Furthermore
, they will be bilingual so it will really helpful for
a companies
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companies
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.
For instance
, in telecom
companies
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,companies
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they
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need
a
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employees
 who have great English speaking skills as well as their own regional languages. So that, they can easily communicate and spread their messages
with
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to
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large
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a large
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 number of people. So it will have more positive points for a
country
 if their
students
 get
education
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an education
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in
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abroad. In conclusion,
this
 trend has more positives points as compared to negatives. The nations will get more practical, knowledgeable, multi-skilled and confident
employees
 if they will get their higher
education
 in another
country
.
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