Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many
people
advocate that one no-car
day
each month can decrease
air
pollution. Another believes that
this
way is not adequate.
This
essay will review the advantages and disadvantages.
Then
we will look for suggestions from others who think there are more valuable ways.
Firstly
,
people
can relax psychologically once a month with a car-free solution because the considerable car noise will decrease on the street. Sometimes we need to listen to natural sounds
instead
of car sounds.
In addition
, we won't have traffic problems, and we can see clean
air
. All of these advantages can help decrease the
air
pollution problem, but
besides
these, we have a lot of drawbacks. On
this
car-free
day
, everybody wants to use public transportation.
This
solution can cause public transit and limited seats problem.
For example
, if somebody has an emergency and needs to go to a hospital or another place quickly, how can they travel with crowded public transportation.
Secondly
, there are suggestions,
such
as free transport with more services every
day
. Every
people
pay tax to the government. Because of
this
reason, transportation should be accessible around the world.
Furthermore
, the government can make clean paths for cycling. They can encourage
people
to use these paths. In conclusion, I firmly believe that car-free days may not be as efficient as the other methods. It could help it, but one
day
is not enough to clean the
air
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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