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Write a formal letter of application for a course abroad

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Dear Sir/Madar, I am writing
this
 letter with the intent of applying to your
English
 educational programme. The reason for my application is because I believe that I will gain
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irreplaceable
 experience in your programme
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 I
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possess
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posses
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 a B2 certificate in
English
 from my high school, which I think is written to be enough for applying. The reason I want to pursue
English
professionaly
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professionally
professional
professionals
 is
because
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 it can act as
key
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 that can open many opportunities for my future. I truly hope that I can get
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 from you as
this
 may be the most invaluable experience, I will ever get the chance to gain.
English
 is without a dought a very important part of our lives as it is the most spoken language in the world. Yours faithfully, Antonio nnn
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • motivated
  • aspiring
  • dedicated
  • education
  • career objectives
  • enhance
  • expertise
  • innovative
  • contribution
  • achievements
  • credentials
  • perspective
  • enrichment
  • diverse
  • aspiration
  • commitment
  • professional development
  • beneficial
  • insightful
  • diligence
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