People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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people
can have the independence to do any sort of job and have a chance to stay all over the world. While Use synonyms
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trend has some drawbacks. In my opinion, I firmly consider the innumerable benefits it provides far more significant than its disadvantages. Linking Words
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provide a logical conclusion.
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people
can get good career opportunities. What I mean by Use synonyms
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is they can travel to any country and have a chance to do their dream job. Linking Words
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means everyone gets jobs according to their qualification and talent. Correct pronoun usage
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development of new computer programs they can do work effectively from anywhere in the world Linking Words
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, in these pandemic days, everyone can do their respective jobs at home without losing and they do not need to put their selves into risk in order goes to the office.
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However
, there are some pitfalls that negate Linking Words
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people
's interaction and socialization during working hours. Use synonyms
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home
the interactions made inside the office will not happen. Add a comma
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people
who opted for working only from home eventually lost the ability to socialise and interact with others.
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everything that has been started so far the transformations in communication and transport gave enormous benefits to individuals. Add a comma
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Nevertheless
, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...