Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
Nowadays, many
parents
and teachers have found that more and more Use synonyms
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are unable to concentrate on or focus on their studies in Use synonyms
school
. Some education experts believe that these Use synonyms
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such
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This
essay will discuss the possible reasons and provide some solutions for dealing with these problems in the below paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is generally accepted that modern society has more advanced technology and new inventions. Linking Words
That is
to say, Linking Words
children
who live in a modern environment may be hard to avoid using different electronic Use synonyms
devices
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such
as laptops, tablets and smartphones which can assist them to finish their Linking Words
school
assignments with higher efficiency. Use synonyms
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children
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devices
or spend too much Use synonyms
time
surfing the internet if they do not receive enough relevant technological courses about managing their Use synonyms
time
to use the internet and electronic Use synonyms
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properly.
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On the other hand
, it can be claimed that Linking Words
parents
have worked more working hours in modern society. Use synonyms
That is
, the Linking Words
children
can lose many opportunities to interact with their Use synonyms
parents
which can lead them to feel lonely and unsatisfied. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it is believed that many Linking Words
parents
feel exhausted after work, so they may not want to spend more Use synonyms
time
communicating or interacting with their Use synonyms
children
. The only method that can avoid their Use synonyms
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to bother them is to give their sons or daughters electronic Use synonyms
devices
to use, but Use synonyms
this
method may easily lead their Linking Words
children
to become addicted to electronic Use synonyms
devices
without focusing on their studies in Use synonyms
school
.
In conclusion, it can be asserted that both Use synonyms
parents
and teachers need to arrange more extracurricular activities for their Use synonyms
children
or students to do because these activities can assist them to develop and cultivate their students' attention or concentration which can benefit them to study in Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite