In many countries the level of crime is increasing and the crimes are becoming more violent. why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

Many countries experienced a wave of

crimes

with

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greater chance of serious consequences.

Although

criminals have different motives to

commite

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commit

an offence, new

technologies

have exacerbated

this

problem. I believe that governments have the greatest ability to combat

this

phenomenon. Two main reasons are being cited for the spate of violent

crimes

.

First

of all,

technologies

are providing a platform for all age groups to have access to

dangerouse

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dangerous

online resources which are advertising

crimes

. One can take the example of the well-known terroristic group ISIS

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grew its members by reaching them using online applications, especially by enticing teenagers.

Besides

that, a great number of violent computer games are being played over recent years that are indirectly provoking teenagers to commit

crimes

.

For example

, a child who spends hours a day killing the game's

charactors

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characters

will find it normal to act the same in reality.

Consequently

,

this

results in the rise of juvenile

crimes

,

that is

where the problem begins. Despite combating the development of

technologies

is impossible, there are still many ways that governments can tackle these

crimes

. One practical solution for

controling

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controlling

violence is to have

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strict supervision on

internet

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.

This

leads to deter criminal groups to widen their members albeit it might be

critisized

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criticized

criticised

by some people as

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violence

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human freedom.

For instance

, by banning unreliable applications, the access of those groups will be limited.

Moreover

, the government can pass a law to prohibit some types of computer games that are involved in

crimes

like

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or robberies.

Therefore

, more tough rules and supervision should be enforced to mitigate

this

problem. To sum up, the recent increase in fatal offences is rooted in available

technologies

. I believe that governments by having

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better control over them can protect society and reduce the crime rate.