Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to give your suggestions to make your magazine more successful. I am an avid reader, so when I have some leisure time, I am always reading.

In addition

, sports and health are my favourite subjects, which is the main reason for purchasing your magazines monthly. There are several features that attract me to read the sporting and health.

First

of all, as your publications involve a huge number of interviews with famous sports players, reading their inspiring stories is a motivation for me.

Furthermore

, there is a wide range of vouchers in your magazines, so it is a great way to save money to use them.

However

, one point of your publications that I don’t like is too many advertisements in them. I guess you should

also

interview a vast majority of professors in the healthy area, presenting various healthy knowledge, which would be an attractive element of your magazine.

Moreover

, it would be wise to decrease the number of commercials. I hope my advice is useful for you to enhance the quality of the magazines. If you would like to discuss my thoughts

further

, please contact me without hesitation. Yours faithfully, Nina Guan