Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Money plays a pivotal role in people's social and family
life
, and it influences the way a child grows up and prepares to meet Use synonyms
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challenges. Usually, rich Use synonyms
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, but some people argue that Use synonyms
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who are brought up in less wealthy Use synonyms
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are often better prepared to face difficulties in Use synonyms
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However
, I strongly believe that Linking Words
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from affluent Use synonyms
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get better opportunities and are better prepared for Use synonyms
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challenges.
On the one hand, many believe that households with less wealth prepare their Use synonyms
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more realistically. Use synonyms
This
is because those Linking Words
children
admittedly learn to face obstacles in early childhood that give them an advantage when they grow up. Use synonyms
For example
, Indian prime minister Modi comes from humble beginnings and his initial struggles taught him how to overcome obstacles and still succeed in Linking Words
life
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In addition
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also
learn to appreciate the value of money, savings, time and hard work, and the importance of family ties. They are not pampered for everything they want or need, rather they need to earn them through hard work. Linking Words
Therefore
they automatically prepare for setting a target in Linking Words
life
and make plans for pursuing them.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
children
from wealthier Use synonyms
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are sometimes a little behind in terms of learning many important lessons in childhood when compared with the mindset of their counterparts. Use synonyms
However
, they have all the facilities they need for their education and prospective career. Linking Words
For instance
, Indian billionaire Mukesh Ambani came from one of the wealthiest Linking Words
families
, went to the best school and university, had the best teachers to teach him and connections to take on new business opportunities, and an affluent family to support him. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, wealthy Linking Words
families
build the foundation for their Use synonyms
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to begin
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life
and give them much needed push to have a better career. These rich Use synonyms
children
eventually learn the most important aspects of Use synonyms
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, maybe a little later than their counterparts, but they have far greater facilities that ultimately give them advantages in Use synonyms
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.
To conclude, wealth and education build a better Use synonyms
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. Because of that, wealthier Use synonyms
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have a much better and more flexible Use synonyms
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than their counterparts. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I believe Linking Words
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from wealthy Use synonyms
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get a competitive edge over Use synonyms
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from less fortunate Use synonyms
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in terms of education and preparation for the imminent Use synonyms
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