Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

There are two different points of view that it is necessary for the rich

people

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to support unwealthy groups of society to fulfil their basic living needs while another opinion is that

governments

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should take

responsibilities

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of

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for

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poor's

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the poor's

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food and education expenses. Both statements have strong reasons and arguments,

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I partially agree with them and will be discussed the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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with, the rich should help the poor

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education and daily bread. It is

natural

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a natural

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thing that every country has two types of

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, some have money and others don't have even basic facilities

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for

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life.

Wealthy

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The wealthy

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class

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should pay their

taxes

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that

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apply

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will be a good

contribute

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in

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to

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the

country

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country's

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economy and help unwealthy

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.

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,if a man runs a company, he will earn from it. is it true,

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that he

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is taking benefits from the country? So, he should honestly pay his tax that would be a chance to help poor

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.

Furthermore

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, they

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must help them

volunteer

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.

In addition

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to

this

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,

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should

also

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play a crucial role to facilitate poor

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communities

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. They should introduce some donation schemes for their

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.

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, when

people

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pay governmental

taxes

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on their purchasing or any other way. It is the responsibility of

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to collect and utilize their

taxes

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.

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, in my opinion,

this

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is the best practice to collect money from

upper

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the upper

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class

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in the form of

taxes

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and

then

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invest in to design

some

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of some

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free educational schemes. Along with the education, they

also

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provide them weekly or monthly money or food packages. To conclude, as we already discussed both points of view

that

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upper

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the upper

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class

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should help

lower

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the lower

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class

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and

also

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governments

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should participate in

to collect

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collecting

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taxes

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from rich

people

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and

help

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the poor. I

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also

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in favour of both and have explained above with some solid arguments.