Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.
#nations #wealth #food #education #responsibility #governments #citizens #support #arguments #evidence
There are two different points of view that it is necessary for the rich
people
to support unwealthy groups of society to fulfil their basic living needs while another opinion is that governments
should take responsibilities
Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
of
Change preposition
for
poor's
food and education expenses. Both statements have strong reasons and arguments, Correct article usage
the poor's
therefore
I partially agree with them and will be discussed the reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, the rich should help the poor in
education and daily bread. It is Change preposition
with
natural
thing that every country has two types of Add an article
a natural
people
, some have money and others don't have even basic facilities of
life. Change preposition
for
Wealthy
Add an article
The wealthy
A wealthy
class
should pay their taxes
that
will be a good Correct pronoun usage
apply
contribute
Replace the word
contribution
in
the Change preposition
to
country
economy and help unwealthy Change noun form
country's
people
. For example
,if a man runs a company, he will earn from it. is it true, he
is taking benefits from the country? So, he should honestly pay his tax that would be a chance to help poor Correct word choice
that he
people
. Furthermore
, they also
must help them volunteer
.
Add the comma(s)
,volunteer
In addition
to this
, governments
should also
play a crucial role to facilitate poor community
. They should introduce some donation schemes for their Fix the agreement mistake
communities
people
. For instance
, when people
pay governmental taxes
on their purchasing or any other way. It is the responsibility of governments
to collect and utilize their taxes
. However
, in my opinion, this
is the best practice to collect money from upper
Correct article usage
the upper
class
in the form of taxes
and then
invest in to design some
free educational schemes. Along with the education, they Change preposition
of some
also
provide them weekly or monthly money or food packages.
To conclude, as we already discussed both points of view that
Add a missing verb
are that
upper
Correct article usage
the upper
class
should help lower
Correct article usage
the lower
class
and also
governments
should participate in to collect
Change the verb form
collecting
taxes
from rich people
and help
the poor. I Wrong verb form
helping
also
in favour of both and have explained above with some solid arguments.Add a missing verb
am also
Submitted by mahmood.hafiz2272 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.