You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline.

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Dear Sir or Madam. My name is Sara James and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the situation that happened at the Ferenc Liszt Airport in Budapest on the 6th of April.I was going to Kutaisi, where were the dental technicians' courses. The problem was, that when I went to the passport control, my documents were checked and they gave me my boarding pass but when I boarded, your employee would not let me on the plane, because the vaccine I was vaccinated with was not suitable. As it turned out later, Sputnik V is allowed to fly to Georgia, but at that time the plane had already left.

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, I could not get to Kutaisi and

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the courses that are really important

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me.

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, the hotel was paid for. Since the problem was caused by your employee, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of my hotel and courses. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Sara Jones

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

172 words

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